Student ID: 07148
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Rewrite SR 2-01: Wikitravel | 08.10.04 | 5 | 443 | 0 | 2 | 1 | 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | My favorite place | 08.10.18 | 6 | 466 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | MR 2-01: Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.04 | 5 | 507 | 5 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | community of my part-time work mates | 08.11.17 | 5 | 290 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | A little known aspect of Kumamoto | 08.12.01 | 5 | 289 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Learning with computers | 08.12.15 | 6 | 325 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- | 32 | 2320 | 5 | 2 | 2 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think ‘MR 2-01: Mrs. Doubtfire’ is my best essay, because I reflected about the movie when I wrote this essay and the essay is longer than my other essays.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | I didn't comment his blog. | --- | --- | --- |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 2008/11/19 11:45 | 08.11.19 | 39 | I wrote her essay's good points. |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | November 19, 2008 10:18 AM | 08.11.19 | 48 | She wrote some reasons about my essay's good points. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | MR 2-01: Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.04 | 161 | They wrote about my essay in detail. |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.05 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 49 | I responded each of them. |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | I did't get any commets. | --- | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | --- |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- My blog displays recent comments from blog visitors in a top of a sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I got few comments and I wrote few comments for my classmate's blog. I should wrote more comments for them.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | BR 2-01: The Shoemaker and the Elves | 08.10.13 | 182 | 0 |
| 2-02 | BR 2-02: Lost Love | 08.11.26 | 304 | 0 |
| 2-03 | BR 2-03: Rotten Apples | 08.12.17 | 286 | 0 |
| 2-04 | BR 2-04: Harry's Great Big Burp | 08.12.19 | 274 | 0 |
| 2-05 | BR 2-05: Don't Be Silly | 09.01.06 | 153 | 0 |
| 2-06 | BR 2-06: The Bully | 09.01.06 | 169 | 0 |
| 2-07 | BR 2-07: Mum to the Rescue | 09.01.06 | 181 | 0 |
| 2-08 | BR 2-08: The Go-kart Race | 09.01.06 | 150 | 0 |
| 2-09 | BR 2-09: The Christmas Disco | 09.01.27 | 195 | 0 |
| 2-10 | BR 2-10: Quiz Night | 09.01.31 | 609 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- I think ‘Harry’s Great Big Burp’ is my best book review, because I wrote my impression and story in detail.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- I changed display. I used many color on my blog.
- I tried to list many photos.
- I changed layout.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- My typing speed became faster than before, because of blogging.
- 'Mrs. Doubtfire' was very interesting movie.
- It was a little hard to write blog.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- Keep writing blog everyday.
- List many photos and media.
- Express your feelings.
____________________ Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVcWriting III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008). portfolios (2007-08), and
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
1 comment:
your protfolio is better. Also it is better to do book reviews more. Go for it.
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