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Thursday, June 26, 2008
All about my keitai
I have used docomo’s cell phone since I was in the third year in junior high school. I changed a type of cell phone three times in the meantime. Now, I use L 704i almost half a year. My cell phone’s color is white and shape is very cute. I do not like to exchange e-mail with my friends too much, because it is troublesome for me. So I often call on my friends instead. Telephone charge is too expensive to pay, because of it. So I want to have a softbank’s cell phone.
Wednesday, June 25, 2008
The rainy season
Today, it rained cats and dogs. I went to KGU by motor bicycle. So I was drenched to skin when I arrived at KGU. Also my clothes got wet. I was uncomfortable with my clothes. I wanted to go back home and change my clothes as soon as possible. After classes were over, I had a part-time job. There were a few customers because of the heavy rain. So I could work easily.
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Portfolio: Writing III, § 1c
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Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])
Key:
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
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Notes:
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Student ID: 07148
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])
1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | A letter to a host family | 2008.04.09 | 3 | 250 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | SHREK | 2008.05.04 | 2 | 244 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
University life 08.05.18 (350 words) | My university life | 2008.05.18 | 5 | 456 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Another review 08.06.01 (400 words) | Armageddon | 2008.06.01 | 6 | 408 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 1 |
Language learning history 08.06.15 (450 words) | language learninghistory | 2008.06.15 | 5 | 450 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
6th essay (pending) TBA | Self Introduction | 2008.07.06 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 1 | ||
Totals | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- I think my best essay is "My university life" because there are many information about my university life, and I could wrote as a matter of form.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [Post] Title | 2008.06.04 | 42 | good |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | My dream | 2008.06.16 | 16 | brief |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | A letter to a host family | 2008.04.09 | 30 | useful |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | My university life | 2008.05.18 | 40 | useful |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.05.21 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 58 | good |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
- My blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a side bar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I try to write blogs in detail when I received questions from my classmates. Also, I write comments on my classmate's blog when I wanted to know about them.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
1-01 | Newspaper Chase | 2008.04.17 | 275 | 0 |
1-02 | The Lost Key | 2008.04.22 | 211 | 0 |
1-03 | A New School | 2008.04.28 | 60 | 0 |
1-04 | More Macdonald's | 2008.04.30 | 169 | 0 |
1-05 | Sam's New Flat | 2008.05.06 | 219 | 0 |
1-06 | The Climsy Crocodile | 2008.05.11 | 206 | 0 |
1-07 | April in Moscow | 2008.06.16 | 303 | 0 |
1-08 | Billy and the Queen | 2008.07.09 | 244 | 0 |
1-09 | The Big Bag Mistake | 2008.07.10 | 277 | 0 |
1-10 | The Blue Cat Club | 2008.07.10 | 274 |
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1-11 | Kim's choice | 2008.07.13 | 394 | 0 |
1-12 | ANITA'S BIG DAY | 2008.07.11 | 452 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: |
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
●I think my best book review is "Newspaper Chase". It was my first book review. I tried to write the subject matter in detail. This story was interesting for me, so I could write a lot of impressions.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
| ○ | |
| --- | --- |
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
- layout
- labels
- links
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- I think it is important to write blog regularly.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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Massy's room: My dream
Massy's room: My dream
This is the post about her dream. She had a happy dream that night. She clould fly in the sky in her dream. Mr. Patrik was also flying with her.
I chose the post because her dream is very interesting for me. One of the interesting points of her dream is that Mr. Patrik flew in the sky with his big smile.
I often dreaming of flying in the air too. I wonder that I have some trouble with my heart...!
This is the post about her dream. She had a happy dream that night. She clould fly in the sky in her dream. Mr. Patrik was also flying with her.
I chose the post because her dream is very interesting for me. One of the interesting points of her dream is that Mr. Patrik flew in the sky with his big smile.
I often dreaming of flying in the air too. I wonder that I have some trouble with my heart...!
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Monday, June 23, 2008
Hikari no Mori
After classes were over, I went to Hikari no Mori with my friend. First, we went to TULLY’S COFFEE. I ate ice cream and my friend had a cup of coffee. Next, we were hanging out in Hikari no Mori. After that, we went to sushi bar to eat dinner. We enjoyed eating and talking. Then, he showed me a lot of pictures when he was a high school student. There were many pictures for example the school sports, graduation ceremony, school festival and so on. I felt homesick for my high school days.
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