Thursday, June 26, 2008

All about my keitai

I have used docomo’s cell phone since I was in the third year in junior high school. I changed a type of cell phone three times in the meantime. Now, I use L 704i almost half a year. My cell phone’s color is white and shape is very cute. I do not like to exchange e-mail with my friends too much, because it is troublesome for me. So I often call on my friends instead. Telephone charge is too expensive to pay, because of it. So I want to have a softbank’s cell phone.
[94 words]

Wednesday, June 25, 2008

The rainy season

Today, it rained cats and dogs. I went to KGU by motor bicycle. So I was drenched to skin when I arrived at KGU. Also my clothes got wet. I was uncomfortable with my clothes. I wanted to go back home and change my clothes as soon as possible. After classes were over, I had a part-time job. There were a few customers because of the heavy rain. So I could work easily.
[73 words]

Portfolio: Writing III, § 1c

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Student ID: 07148
(last five digits of
your student no.)








Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c

(See: Note 1, below)








0.0. Overview




Reviews, Posts, Words, and More














(See: Note 2, below.)





1.0. Essays




(See: Note 3, below[.])

























































































































































































































































































































1.1. Showcase



Short
titles



[+ links]
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)



A letter to a host family

2008.04.09
3
250
1
0
0
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)



SHREK

2008.05.04
2
244
0
0
1
0
University life
08.05.18
(350 words)



My university life

2008.05.18
5
456
3
0
0
0
Another review
08.06.01
(400 words)



Armageddon

2008.06.01
6
408
2
0
1
1
Language learning
history
08.06.15
(450 words)



language learning




history

2008.06.15
5
450
0
0
0
0
6th essay
(pending)
TBA



Self Introduction

2008.07.06


0
0
0
1


















Totals---
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Key:




¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length



W: number of words



C: number of comments



L: number of links



P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded



1.2. Best Essay




Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.







  • I think my best essay is "My university life" because there are many information about my university life, and I could wrote as a matter of form.



2.0. Comments








































































































































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*



Best Reviews 1.1 (2008): Best [Post] Title

2008.06.04
42
good
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*


My dream

2008.06.16
16
brief
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*



A letter to a host family

2008.04.09
30
useful
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*



My university life

2008.05.18
40
useful
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.05.21
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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58
good
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.





2.5. Recent comments display




Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?







  • My blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a side bar.



2.6. Additional reflections on comments







  • I try to write blogs in detail when I received questions from my classmates. Also, I write comments on my classmate's blog when I wanted to know about them.









3.0. Book Reviews








































































































































































































































































































































































































































3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01



Newspaper Chase

2008.04.17
275
0
1-02



The Lost Key

2008.04.22
211
0
1-03



A New School

2008.04.28
60
0
1-04



More Macdonald's

2008.04.30
169
0
1-05



Sam's New Flat

2008.05.06
219
0
1-06



The Climsy Crocodile

2008.05.11
206
0
1-07

April in Moscow
2008.06.16

303

0
1-08
Billy and the Queen 2008.07.09
244
0
1-09
The Big Bag Mistake

2008.07.10

277

0
1-10
The Blue Cat Club

2008.07.10

274




0

1-11

Kim's choice

2008.07.13

394

0
1-12
ANITA'S BIG DAY
2008.07.11
452

0








































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TOTALS:






Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).





3.2. Best Book Review




Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.





●I think my best book review is "Newspaper Chase". It was my first book review. I tried to write the subject matter in detail. This story was interesting for me, so I could write a lot of impressions.




4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media















































































































































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)








  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")








  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)








  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)








  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?







  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?






    • __13_ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.






    • holidays (13)



    • about me (11)



    • eatings (10)



    • my friends (10)

    • typing topics (12)

    • feelings (9)

    • book reviews (12)

    • part-time jobs (7)

    • hang outs (6)

    • shoppings (4)

    • drinkings (3)

    • classes (3)

    • jobs (2)

    • computers (1)

    • languages (1)

    • musics (1)



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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
○ 







  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?








  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?






    • _16__ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?







  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*






    • _0_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?







  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?






    • __1_ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:






    1. power point




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4.4. Overall presentation




What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.







  1. layout



  2. labels



  3. links








5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing







● I can typing faster than before. I enjoy reading my classmate's blog.







6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors







  • I think it is important to write blog regularly.




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Notes:







  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).



  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.



  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)



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Massy's room: My dream

Massy's room: My dream
This is the post about her dream. She had a happy dream that night. She clould fly in the sky in her dream. Mr. Patrik was also flying with her.

I chose the post because her dream is very interesting for me. One of the interesting points of her dream is that Mr. Patrik flew in the sky with his big smile.

I often dreaming of flying in the air too. I wonder that I have some trouble with my heart...!
[81 words]

Monday, June 23, 2008

Hikari no Mori

After classes were over, I went to Hikari no Mori with my friend. First, we went to TULLY’S COFFEE. I ate ice cream and my friend had a cup of coffee. Next, we were hanging out in Hikari no Mori. After that, we went to sushi bar to eat dinner. We enjoyed eating and talking. Then, he showed me a lot of pictures when he was a high school student. There were many pictures for example the school sports, graduation ceremony, school festival and so on. I felt homesick for my high school days.
[94 words]